| 试论《围城》修辞改笔之得失 |
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| 引用本文： | 郝荣斋.试论《围城》修辞改笔之得失[J].廊坊师范学院学报,2007,23(2):28-32. |
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| 作者姓名： | 郝荣斋 |
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| 作者单位： | 河北省出版总社,报刊中心,河北,石家庄,050071 |
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| 摘 要： | 《围城》的成功，得益于钱锺书对言语的反复修改。从初刊本到初版本再到定本，其言语逐步优化，而这又是与作者“削繁求简”、“避复去板”、“以俗为雅”、“状物如睹”、“义切音和”等观点相契合的。当然，改笔之中也不免有“疵累”。
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| 关 键 词： | 围城 初刊本 初版本 定本 修辞改笔 |
| 文章编号： | 1671-1416（2007）02-0028-05 |
| 收稿时间： | 2006-10-18 |
| 修稿时间： | 2006年10月18 |
On the Loss and Gains of Rhetoric Corrections of Wei Cheng |
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| HAO Rong-zhai.On the Loss and Gains of Rhetoric Corrections of Wei Cheng[J].Journal of Langfang Teachers College,2007,23(2):28-32. |
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| Authors: | HAO Rong-zhai |
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| Abstract: | The success of Wei Cheng benefits from the author Qian Zhongshu's repeated correction on the words.Readers can find that language becomes more and more polished from the early editions to the final edition.All the corrections are carried out according to the author's concept of style such as being more simple,being more flexible,being more elegant by using common words,being more vivid and being musical in rhythm.However,there are also some "flaws" among these corrections. |
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| Keywords: | Wei Cheng early editions the first version the final edition rhetoric corrections |
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